From: Sergey Matveev Date: Sun, 3 May 2015 14:35:45 +0000 (+0300) Subject: [DOC] Fix grammar X-Git-Tag: 3.1^2~5 X-Git-Url: http://www.git.cypherpunks.ru/?p=govpn.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=94ade1c5fcd8ef0668e87a451ac5147fae4def98 [DOC] Fix grammar Thanks to Patrick Chkoreff. Signed-off-by: Sergey Matveev --- diff --git a/doc/download.texi b/doc/download.texi index ea2e04f..5168e34 100644 --- a/doc/download.texi +++ b/doc/download.texi @@ -29,11 +29,11 @@ You can obtain releases source code prepared tarballs from the links below: @end multitable -Also you can try it's @ref{Contacts, .onion} version. +Also you can try its @ref{Contacts, .onion} version. Sourceforge.net also provides mirror for the files above: @url{http://sourceforge.net/projects/govpn/files/}. -You can obtain it's development source code by cloning +You can obtain its development source code by cloning Git repository: @code{git clone https://github.com/stargrave/govpn.git}. Pay attention that it does not contain compiled documentation and is not recommended for porters because of that. diff --git a/doc/handshake.texi b/doc/handshake.texi index 6f1e37e..7e0cc53 100644 --- a/doc/handshake.texi +++ b/doc/handshake.texi @@ -64,9 +64,9 @@ symmetric encryption. @item Server decrypts @code{RS}, @code{RC}, @code{SC}, @code{Sign(DSAPriv, K)}. - @item Compares @code{RS} with it's own one sent before. Server + @item Compares @code{RS} with its own one sent before. Server decrypts @code{RS}, @code{RC}, @code{SC} with key @code{K}, compares - @code{RS} with it's own one sent before. + @code{RS} with its own one sent before. @item Verifies @code{K} signature with verifier @code{DSAPub}. @@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ symmetric encryption. @item @itemize @bullet @item Client decrypts @code{RC} -@item Compares with it's own one sent before. +@item Compares with its own one sent before. @item Computes final session encryption key as server did. @end itemize diff --git a/doc/news.texi b/doc/news.texi index 75ec725..7160587 100644 --- a/doc/news.texi +++ b/doc/news.texi @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ packets became smaller @item Ability to hide underlying packets lengths by appending noise, junk -data during transmission. Each packet can be fill up-ed to it's +data during transmission. Each packet can be fill up-ed to its maximal MTU size. @item diff --git a/doc/precautions.texi b/doc/precautions.texi index 93b179e..cd759ea 100644 --- a/doc/precautions.texi +++ b/doc/precautions.texi @@ -3,13 +3,13 @@ The very important precaution is the @strong{cryptographically good} pseudo random number generator. GoVPN uses native operating system PRNG -as entropy source. You have no way to check it's quality in closed +as entropy source. You have no way to check its quality in closed source code operating systems, so it is recommended not to use them if you really needs security. Moreover it is possible that those OS leaks information about possible PRNG states. And at least Apple OS X and Microsoft Windows are already known to have weak CSPRNGs. -GoVPN could use it's own PRNG implementation like +GoVPN could use its own PRNG implementation like @url{https://www.schneier.com/fortuna.html, Fortuna}, but it is much easier to use the right OS, to use free software. @@ -19,6 +19,6 @@ If it fails, produces equal values at least once, then all you traffic related to that key could be decrypted. We use password (passphrase) authentication, so overall security fully -depends on it's strength. So you should use long, high-entropy +depends on its strength. So you should use long, high-entropy passphrases. Also remember to keep passphrase on temporary file as described in @ref{Verifier}. diff --git a/doc/verifierstruct.texi b/doc/verifierstruct.texi index 3b969dc..b508b48 100644 --- a/doc/verifierstruct.texi +++ b/doc/verifierstruct.texi @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ Verifier is a derivative of the password. It is resistant to dictionary attacks and can not be used for authentication (only -it's verifying). +its verifying). @verbatim SOURCE = PBKDF2(SALT=PeerId, PASSWORD, 1<<16, SHA512)